- Title: Water
- Author: Andrea Dale
- ISBN: 2940011182518
- Page: 126
- Format: Nook
Water That s what does it for me Ocean waves, relentlessly rocking A pounding, pulsing waterfall Bodies tangled together in a bubbling Jacuzzi cauldron A steam room, dripping like a tropical jungle Snow pressed against goose pimpled skin, hardening my nipples to painful, begging peaks A slippery, sexy short short story by a legendary erotica heavy hitter.Includes BWater That s what does it for me Ocean waves, relentlessly rocking A pounding, pulsing waterfall Bodies tangled together in a bubbling Jacuzzi cauldron A steam room, dripping like a tropical jungle Snow pressed against goose pimpled skin, hardening my nipples to painful, begging peaks A slippery, sexy short short story by a legendary erotica heavy hitter.Includes BONUS stories Dreaming the Dance and Artistic License Water originally appeared at For the Girls, 2004.Called a legendary erotica heavy hitter by the ber legendary Violet Blue , ANDREA DALE writes sizzling erotica with a generous dash of romance Her work which has been called poignantly erotic, heartbreaking, and exceptional has appeared in the Publisher s Weekly starred Best Erotic Romance and Romantic Times 4 star anthology Steamlust, as well as about 100 other anthologies from Harlequin Spice, Avon Red, and Cleis Press She finds passion in rock music, clever words, piercing blue eyes, the wind in her hair, and the scent of the ocean Visit cyvarwydd for information.
Recent Comments "Water"
It's a good thing this was free, because even as a short, short sample, this didn't do anything for me.
This was awful. Not only was it lackluster, the author tried to use vocabulary beyond her level.Examples:"The sluicung heat of a shower." (Yes, that is the complete sentence.) "The slow current turns me, languid." and "He poises against a mossy rock, resting half raised out of the water."There was clearly a need for either an editor, a proof reader, or a better thesaurus.
Okis was suppose to be a sample, but to be honest I didn't know if this was a sex scene or a swimming scene:-( I know that the description were very beautiful; however something was missing. Maybe if the author had of made the sample a little longer, I could have gotten a better feel for the story.
Free Read on my Kindle. It took me about five minutes MAYBE ten to read and I'm finding it difficult to leave a review for something that was so short there isn't really anything to say. I think it was supposed to be an erotica? I can't really even critique the writing because there wasn't enough there. I'm just glad I didn't pay for it.
This is a very brief short story that I assume is meant to give a sample of Ms Dale's writing style.The style is very 'flowery' and poetic, and had it been any longer I probably wouldn't have been able to finish it. It's tiny, beautiful and not nearly enough to be enticing.
Steamy, but too short, even for a short story.
This one was so short it didn't really seem to go any place or make sense. I think that I have read more on book covers.
Short, hot, and it was done very tastefully.I wanted more of this piece and more of the author's work.
Erotica in 5 short pages. It's okay nothing special.
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